Blog #13 Combining my papers
After you combine your 3 papers or completed the first half of your novel/creative work, discuss how you created a cohesive reading experience for your audience. For example, what major changes did you need to make after combining the papers? What most needs editing at this point? Where will you go from here?
My paper I feel was easily put together and helped my readers understand what I was trying to grasp as well as being concise on the topic and what I want my readers to get out of the paper. I think my audience was very informed on the subject. One comment I got was that the reader never had an interest in raves. But after reading throught my combined 3 papers, she wanted to know more information on the subject. One major change I need to make is clearly defining drugs and drug abreviations such as MDMA. Not everyone will know or understand what the drugs are and the effects of such things. Therefore, I want to put together a little table at the end of my paper where my works citied is that clearly explains the abreviations and the effects of the drugs mentioned. Another editing is working on making my paper flow with transitional words that makes each paragraph flow together better. From here, I want to build more information on my paper, correct gramatical and transitional errors and work on my table for drugs at the end of my paper.
